Doom, to the death of the wise
Doom, to our efforts and amends,
Doom, to paradise!
Death, to the fog over moon, I said,
Death, to her innocent cries,
Death again, to the one who puts,
A death to our disguise.
Or our disguise to a death, I mean,
Or his confidential lies,
Or our lust for the color green,
Or the way the time flies.
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4 comments:
I love this catchy rhythm and harsh realism with a dark kind of beauty...
Fascinating use of words to convey emotions and deeper thoughts. Meter was nice and fit quite well.
Bravo..! :)
thank you everyone!